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)的故事,我已经想好了题目叫逃学生的故事,就不知道该从何写起,能不能帮办我,我不是让你帮我写,就是帮忙找个切入点。谢谢
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你可以以自己为主人公写感情会更加深入人心,第一段直接开门见山:"今天我逃学了".然后交待原因:为什么会逃学,是心情不好?还是沉浸在放假的气氛中没有调适过来?还是有什么压力?都可以写,然后第可以写逃学后心情怎样,是感到轻松,或是更加烦燥?然后可以写当你认识到逃学是不对的,赶快回到学校,这时你面对关心你的同学和老师甚至父母,你的感受,以及你以后会认真学习的决心!
写出你自己的真实感受就可以了,加油喔:)
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他,最后,他改了,从此以后他在也不逃学了.
伴着午后预备铃的急促声响,班主任老师铁青的脸出现在教室门框的正中央。
“xxx。你给我出来!”
炸雷似的声音一下镇住了所有的同学。我完全不知道是怎样在同学们众目睽睽之下,走出教室,站在怒冲冲的班主任老师面前的。
“这回你还有啥话说?!现在就立即回去叫家长!家长不来,你不用进班!”
我迟疑着,想辩解点什么。
“怎么还不走!?”
于是我离开了教室门口,在班主任老师恼恨的双眼目送下,不紧不慢地踅出了校门。
可我决定不叫家长,不回家。
我开始游逛,漫无目的……
(往下干了什么、想了什么、怎么收场等,你自己续吧?)
你可以这样写:"因内心空虚,他悄然离开了神圣的校园;因向往自由,他毅然卸下了肩头的书包;因渴求快乐,他告诉自己要学会坚强……"你就这个样子开头.然后写一些这个逃学生在社会上的经历,可以有愉快的,也可以有痛苦的,其中可以穿插一些他的心理活动,如幻想如果当初不离开校园自己会是什么样子,他是否想念关心自己的老师同学和朋友等等,如何在困难中学会坚强,学会克服自己的弱点.在文章最后,你可以再深化主题"回首往事,一切都像是一场梦,梦如人生,人生如梦,只有坚强,快乐,自信地活着,人生才会绽放异彩!"
  现在的老师都比较喜欢思想深邃的作文,只要写出自己的真实感受,那就是好文章!
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请以老师当众表扬你为话题,用下面所给句子开头,续写一篇英语短文。It is a great honor as well as a pleasure for me to be praised by the teacher publicly before my classmates.注意:1. 续写词数100个左右;2. 不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。 
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