解答关于新高考英语作文的几个问题~1.新高考作文题型有哪些变化？在过去几年间，高考中英语作文仅仅只占150分的30分，题型名为应用文，实际多为书信。从2021年英语高考改革起，英语高考都是作文改为满分40分，分为两篇作文：大作文为读后续写，25分；小作文为应用文书写，15分。其中读后续写是全新题型，难度较大，卷面上会给出一篇记叙文，然后下面会给出两段的开头句，要求分别以正常的逻辑把记叙文接下来可能发生的故事写完。读后续写题型介绍：提供一段350词以内的语言材料，要求考生依据材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标示关键词进行续写，将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。例文：读后续写练习（一）Possible answer:Paragraph 1The officer was so angry that he asked the policeman to beat him up again. The farmer was very afraid, and he thought he would be sentenced to death by killing people, but he was innocent. He must tell people the truth, but no one could hear his voice. He hoped that someone could come and save him.Paragraph 2The farmer was lucky .A few days later, a young man came to the police station with a lot of journalists, saying that he saw the murderer. It was the police officer who killed the man on the snow! He saw the police office used a knife killing the man late in the evening. He was so frightened and ran away. But the young man thought the farmer was innocent. So he took the great courage to expose the real criminal. After the investigation, the young man was right. The police officer was sent into prison and the policeman who beat up the farmer was fired, and the brave young man was regarded as the hero by the villagers.2.时间应该如何分配？如果算上草稿时间（卷面书写在高考/大名单考试中很重要），我建议学生以40分钟为准。其中28-30分钟给读后续写，10-12分钟给应用文。
3.写新高考作文容易产生的误区是什么？首先，官方给出的评分标准（在此只选出了最高一档的评分）第五档（21-25分）：与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接合理；内容丰富，应用了5个以上短文中标出的关键词语；所使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确，可能有些许错误，但完全不影响表达，有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑。常犯错误有三：高考作文里需要堆砌一些所谓“高级词汇”，句子越复杂越好。作文中对话过多。写作中以故事推导，或者以叙事为主4.以上这些问题应该如何避免？先说对话：以下是一篇很典型的错误范文中的一段该文中，过多对话显得文章零碎，啰嗦。而且最关键的是，这样写等于自断后路。因为过多的对话虽然使得故事情节上有所发展，但实际也等于基本没有给自己任何的空间去发挥细节描写（重中之重）以及较为复杂的语法结构。因此，有效对话设计是必须要注意的，其在文中的比例不能大。再说文章的叙事：高考之所以设置这样一个新类型的作文题，其旨在考察学生在描述和叙述上的综合能力。所以如果只是在“讲故事”，其实等于忽略了该作文题下的重要考察点：描述。最后说词句：这是一个我们同学，无论面对高考英语作文，还是稍难一些的雅思/托福写作，所面临的最大误解：认为作文的句子和词就应该写得越难越好，来体现自己在词句基本功上的优越性。先抛开对难词使用的误解，若是这么做已经违背了写作最根本的目的：让人读懂，至少是让英语能力过关的人看懂。以下是一篇来自Bertrand Russell自传里的信件的选段，该信是其父在病亡之前写给自己母亲的绝笔，距今大约150年。老实说，这封信里的词甚至会比我们一些高中生的词汇还要来得简单，但从表意，传情还有流畅性来说，这封信都已经算上乘之作。另外，高考中，从来没要求过学生必须在词汇/语法上必须要做到“难”，所以在这点上，希望各位同学不必纠结，文字的流畅度远重要于个别词汇。高级词汇只是做锦上添花，并不是得分的强标准，不要过度理解。【新高考读后续写如何下手？】读后续写是一篇记叙文截去后面部分，让考生续写截去的部分。原文材料350词以内，所续写文章150个词左右；原文多是情节丰富的记叙文，偶有少量议论文；原文给出10处左右的标有下划线的关键词语，所续写短文应使用5个以上；续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已经给出。【文章写作的特点】Exposition是序幕，即故事的背景; Inciting incident 就是引起故事矛盾或冲突(conflict) 的事件，也可以理解为冲突的起因 (conflict and its cause)；Rising action就是围绕冲突故事主人公采取一系列的行动；Climax就是冲突达到了高潮，不是所有的故事都有高潮；Falling action就是冲突向得以解决的方向发展；Resolution就是冲突得到了解决；尾声Denouement就是冲突得以解决后的情况说明，有时resolution和denouement很难区分。【读后续写思路点拨】1.通读全文，读懂原文通读全文首先要解决好五个W和一个H的问题，即理清人物who、地点where、时间when、事件what、原因why及怎样发展how。2.构思情节，谋篇布局按照原文中事件发生的逻辑性，构思好情节发展，这个发展须符合情节内在的逻辑。因为这不是写科幻小说，不是写神话，因此应该符合现实发生的真实性。所以这个环节的主要任务是谋篇布局。布局谋篇最关键应利用好两方面的信息：十个标有下划线的关键词语。3、高级词汇怎么放？读后续写的词汇得分点除了一般的名词、形容词、副词之外，最重要的是高级动词！因为续写侧重叙事，里面涉及到的人的动作是非常多的，比如cry，这就过于简单，要侧重细节描写，to show, not to tell, 高分作文一般就会写，With shoulders shivering, her tears cannot help streaming down her face.她的双肩哆哆嗦嗦，眼泪情不自禁的从她脸上流下来。所以类似表现喜怒哀乐的情况，都要事先做好准备（注意，两三句即可，但这两三句一定要是最佳句，如句式，高级词汇都要是最好的，熟记于心，一直用即可），侧重刻画描写，脸，手，眼睛都可以描写。4、关于情节，提倡一波两折。虽说读后续写没有字数限制，但是考虑到字的大小与整体篇幅限制，一般两个波折即可，如事态变坏一个转折，最后事态好转一个转折即可。侧重人物矛盾与心理冲突，比如两人之间的猜忌，后重归于好，类似小学生作文。【写作技巧】1.从原文中整理出3～5个小的情节，从中推理出续写的主要情节。情节不能自己读后凭空想象，按自己看过的小说、电视剧情节适当推理。2.根据两个段首语来推理情节。段首语往往决定着这一整段话的走向，不可衔接不当。3.根据关键词来推理情节发展。原文中关键词一般会在十个左右，也并不是都能用上的。有一部分关键词对于预测下面的情节是很有导向意义的，因而会在后文中用的到。4.根据故事需要，丰富、有条理地增加一些次要的情节。比如人物的表情、动作、心理活动，细节描写等。5.根据生活常识或者社会经验，丰富文章的细节。不可闹出不合常理的笑话，成为改卷老师紧张时期改卷期间的谈资。【表达分享】脚部动作：1. Then Lisa stood up and made her way through the crowd toward me.2. Lisa planted her feet firmly in front of me.3. She managed to climb onto it and waited patiently.4. Reuben ran/rushed down Water Street, trembling with great panic.5. The shadows were lengthening when Reuben arrived at the factory.6. Then, clutching the tin can, he headed for the shop.7. Racing home, Reuben burst through the front door.8. Disappointed and frustrated, the poor man made his way back to his family.9. Suddenly, the woman stood up and entered the house in tears.10. And yet, they all just stood there staring at me, motionless.手上动作：1. Stunned, I stood up and gave her an awkward hug / hugged her in an awward way.2. Speechless, she smiled radiantly and gathered her son into her arms.3. The nearer it got, the more she waved the yellow blouse wildly.4. The man took the sacks, reached into his pocket and placed four coins in Reuben's hand.5. Then, clutching the tin can, he headed for the shop.6. He parked down the street from Bobby's house, and rushed to his front door, trembling with excitement.7. The man gently wrapped the gift in brown paper and placed the parcel in Reuben's hands.8. Dora lifted the lid, tears beginning to blur her vision.9. Seeing no other people notice us, I placed the Christmas present down and pounded his doorbell.10. She didn't say a word, but smiled a watery smile and held my hand tightly情感描写：1.喜悦①The smile on her face shone like a diamond.她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。②A smile of understanding flashed across his face.他脸上露出了一种理解的微笑。③A ripple of excitement ran through them.一阵激动声穿过他们。④Laughter lingered around the room.笑声在房间里萦绕。⑤His eyes twinkled with pleasure.他的眼睛闪烁着快乐。⑥A wild gaiety took hold of her.一种疯狂的快乐控制了她。⑦Unforgettable were her eyes that shone like diamonds and lips held in a steady smile.令人难忘的是她的眼睛像钻石一样闪闪发光，嘴角保持着稳定的微笑。⑧I was wild with joy.我欣喜若狂。⑨I was pleased beyond description.我高兴得难以形容。⑩She wore a shining smile on her face.她脸上带着灿烂的笑容。2.愤怒：①I was seized by anger.我充满了愤怒。②He was fuming with rage.他气得大发雷霆。③His anger boiled over.他的愤怒爆发了。④He could hardly/scarcely contain his rage.他几乎控制不住怒火。⑤He was breathing fire and fury.他充满着怒火。⑥His voice trembled with anger.他的声音因愤怒而颤抖。⑦He gave me a look of burning anger.他愤怒地看了我一眼。⑧He glared at me with burning eyes.他用灼热的目光怒视着我。⑨He flared up at the word.他一听到这个字就勃然大怒。⑩His face clouded with anger.他气得脸色阴沉。3.悲伤烦恼：①He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks.他静静地站着，眼泪顺着面颊流了下来。②I feel like I am floating in an ocean of sadness.我漂浮在悲伤的海洋里。③Her hands were shaking. She was on the verge of tears.她的手在颤抖。她快要哭了。④Hearing the news, so desperate was he that he drowned sadness in wine.听到这个消息，他绝望地把悲伤淹没在酒里。⑤She burst into tears and ran out of the room.她突然哭了起来，跑出了房间。⑥ She sobbed, hiding her face in her hands.她掩面哭泣。⑦I tried to fight back tears.
/My eyes were filled with tears.我努力忍住眼泪。/ 我的眼里充满了泪水。⑧A frown（皱眉）now stood on his face.他皱起了眉头。⑨They sat there with glum looks on their faces.他们坐在那里，带着一脸忧郁。⑩The news cast a cloud of gloom over his face.这消息使他脸上蒙上了一层阴影。4.害怕：①He turned to me, with his eyes full of horror.他转过身来，眼里充满了恐惧。②Fear slowly creeps upon her.恐惧慢慢地蔓延到她身上。③She was struck with horror when...她感到恐惧…④She was choked by fear.她因恐惧而窒息。⑤Her face turned pale and stood there tongue-tied.她脸色苍白地站在那里，舌头打结。⑥A flood of fear welled up in him. / Fear flooded over him.他心中涌起一阵恐惧。 / 恐惧淹没了他。⑦Her heart beat so violently that she felt nearly suffocated（窒息）.她的心跳得厉害，几乎窒息而死。⑧She shook all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles. 她浑身颤抖，觉得如坐针毡。5. 感动：①Touched deeply/immensely, we…被深深感动，我们…②Tears filling her eyes, she offered her heartfelt gratitude.她热泪盈眶，表示衷心的感谢。③With tears streaming down her face, she... 泪水顺着她的脸颊流了下来，...【读后续写表达情感常用到的高级表达】【66篇真题例文赏析】由于篇幅有限，只分享一部分，需要完整电子版，可关注+点赞后，评论区发“已关注，已点赞”即可获得领取方式。..................