有英语大神帮我找一下这篇文章中的语法错误吗?Eugene
9:50:42Dear host family mom and dad:How are you doing?This is Yujia Liao writing to you from China.I also have an English name,Eugene.Please call me Eugene if you like to.I am so excited about the chance to live with you during the next school year.Thank you so much for your kindness.I am 14-year-old now.I live with my parents at Yiyang,a beautiful small town at China’s Hunan Province.I am the only child in my family.My dad is the general manager of a bank at my hometown.My mom works for China Mobile Communication Company.They both are very good person.My mom always takes good care of me.To make sure I eat well at school,she would even deliver lunch to me during her lunch break.And my dad always teaches me important lessons and helps me to become a good person.I love them both.I love pets,especially dogs.But I never got a pet before because my parents thought I did not have enough time to take care of a pet.If you have a pet,I will be so happy to help you to take care of it.I have a dream for myself.My dream is to become a computer engineer when I grow up.When I first got my computer and smart phone,I was very interested in knowing how those cool stuff actually worked.I want to stay at America and find a good university to study computer science.I like to read books.Harry Potter is one of my favorites.When I feel bored,I like to listen to some soft music.I learned that American students are very independent.They are on their own about learning.Teachers do not force them to study.I like this kind school.That’s why I want to come to America for high school.I am very outgoing and friendly.I like to ride bike with my friends.I make friends easily and quickly.I am confident that I will get along well with your family.Thanks again for being so kind to me.My mom and dad asked me to thank you,too.Hope to see you soon at Ohio.Love,Eugene 01/14/2014
Wow,your English is excellent!You've expressed yourself really well!&没有语法问题,也没有表达问题.两个笔误：They both are very good person —— personsHope to see you soon at Ohio —— in Ohio&祝你美国求学愉快!
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Dear host family Mom and Dad,Thank you very much for your kindness. I’m Yujia Liao, 14 years old, writing to you from China. My English name is Eugene. I am so excited about the chance to live wi...
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My favourite movie
Although there are many kinds of movies in the world, such as actions, comedies or dramas. But adventures and science fiction are always my favourite. The movie named Harry Potter is my favourite.
Harry Potter is also a novel. It’s written by J.K.Rowling. She is a single mother with a daughter. She is an English woman. She was born in 1966. She likes writing and telling stories.
Harry Potter has been adapted into a filmed by an English film producer. Daniel Radcliffe acts as Harry Potter. Rupert Crint acts as Ron, the best friend of Harry .Emma Watson acts as Hermione, the best friend of Harry.
There are Harry Potter one, two, three. But I like Harry Potter one best. Because it has many fantastic pieces, and magnificent places. It introduces many new things. Like Hongwarts, is an English boarding school for wizards. This school is full of magic. The stairs will change when they like to, the door is hidden, the apparitions waft around the school, and the pictures can move and speak. If you want to go back to your dormitory, you must cross a picture, and tell the right password to the characters in the picture. But, these are just a few parts of the film. There are more exciting pieces. Although the characters are just children, but they acting is very good.
My favourite movie
我最喜愛的電影
Although there are many kinds of movies in the world, such as actions, comedies or dramas. But adventures and science fiction are always my favourite. The movie named Harry Potter is my favourite.
Harry Potter is also a novel. It’s written by J.K.Rowling. She is a single mother with a daughter. She is an English woman. She was born in 1966. She likes writing and telling stories.
雖然這世界上有許多種類型的電影，比如動作片、喜劇片或劇情片，但是我最喜愛的類型還是冒險片和科幻片。《哈利波特》是我的最愛，這部電影是根據J.K.Rowling的小說哈利波特改編。J.K.Rowling現在和她的女兒一起生活。她出生在1996年。她喜歡寫作和講故事。（這裡的英文句子有些不連貫，所以聽起來有些怪怪的。）
Harry Potter has been adapted into a filmed by an English film producer. Daniel Radcliffe acts as Harry Potter. Rupert Crint acts as Ron, the best friend of Harry .Emma Watson acts as Hermione, the best friend of Harry. （這裡是介紹哈利波特裏面的人物，如果需要的話，請追問。）
There are Harry Potter one, two, three. But I like Harry Potter one best. Because it has many fantastic pieces, and magnificent places. It introduces many new things. Like Hongwarts, is an English boarding school for wizards. This school is full of magic. The stairs will change when they like to, the door is hidden, the apparitions waft around the school, and the pictures can move and speak. If you want to go back to your dormitory, you must cross a picture, and tell the right password to the characters in the picture. But, these are just a few parts of the film. There are more exciting pieces.
哈利波特系列有3部，但是我最喜歡的是第一部，因為這一部里有許許多多美妙的劇情和震撼，詳細的場景。第一部也介紹了許多新的人物場景，如一所男巫住宿學校Hongwarts。這所學校充滿了魔法，比如樓梯可以自由變換，門可以隱藏自己，在牆上的畫可以隨意移動和說話。如果你想要回到宿舍，你必須說出正確的密碼告訴畫裡的人物並且穿過這幅畫。這些只是電影的一小部份，還有很多激動人心的片段。
Although the characters are just children, but they acting is very good.
雖然演員們都是孩子，但是他們的演技讓人稱讚。
（語法沒有多少錯誤，只是句子有一些不連貫而已。）
Thank you~
Harry Potter has been adapted into a filmed by an English film producer.
哈利波特這本書被一名英國電影製片改編成了一部電影。
Daniel Radcliffe acts as Harry Potter. Rupert Crint acts as Ron, the best friend of Harry .Emma Watson acts as Hermione, the best friend of Harry.
丹尼尔·雷德克利在劇中飾演哈利波特，鲁伯特·格林特飾演哈利最好的朋友，罗恩。艾玛·沃特森也一樣是飾演哈利的好朋友，赫敏。
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扫描下载二维码帮我看下这句话有么有语法错误Allow my little pride to be depended on like this、because of having you by me please请允许我小小的骄傲因为有你这样的依靠 好像是把
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很别扭啊？楼主要表达什么意思用中文说下行不？
至少不能用allow直接开头。。。to
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不对，because of 是哥连词。Please allow me with a little pride to be depended on this ,because of having you arround me.
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