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2011中考英语书面表达应对策略及必背范文15篇
2011中考英语书面表达应对策略及必背范文15篇【考点扫描】书面表达是每年中考必考题型，是考查学生交际能力的一个重要组成部分。书面表达通常有三种形式：1、书信、日记、通知、留言、假条；2、看图作文；3、根据汉语提示作文。无论是那一种书面表达形式，考生所写的短文都要紧扣主题、文理通顺，要素完整，语言准确、得当、格式正确、无大、小写和拼写错误，标点符号正确，能达到交际目的。【名师解难】一. 训练方法1. 记。认真系统复习和背诵基础知识和优美的句子、句型。中国有句古话，叫"熟读唐诗三百首，不会吟诗也会作"。同样，要使自己具有较强的写作能力，首先应该熟读和背诵一些句型和短文。许多同学写出来的语言根本不符合英语的语言习惯，相当一部分人有对照中文逐字翻译的不良习惯，不去理会中英文的差异。大量的背诵和阅读是提高写作能力的有效办法，同学们若有大量的现成语言积累在脑海里，自己写起文段来，就可以做到脱口而出，或是模仿、套用，甚至发挥。2. 练。每练一篇书面表达题，都要真正学到一点东西，不可贪多而边学边忘。平时可以采用循序渐进、灵活多样的练习方式。从根据提示词写单句开始，到写单句，然后到写几句话，最后到写流利的文段。尽量尝试多种形式的写作，如短信、说明、通知、便条、明信片、看图写作、根据表格或记录写短文等。3. 写。要进行实战写作。要求自己在20分钟内写出100个词的短文，并且质量高、内容全、形式正确。这样形成习惯，考试时就能得心应手。二. 应试策略1. 审题目：要切中题意。《中考考试说明》指出，书面表达要切中题意。怎样才能切中题意？就是要认真审题，看到考题后，先不要急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求的内容。在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面，确定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下笔，看懂题意，根据图画、图表、提纲或短文提供的资料和信息来审题。审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。2. 圈要点：防止遗漏要点。要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点，同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力，把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。3. 列提纲：为写作做好准备。根据文章要点短文的中心思想将主要句型、关键词语记下，形成提纲。　4. 定基调：定出时态、人称、顺序、开头、结尾。　5. 写全文：写短文时要做到以下六个方面：(1)避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用，以避免重复和呆板。(2)多用简单句型，记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或情态动词等较复杂的句型。　　(3)注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。　　　1）语态、时态要准确无误。　　　2）主谓语要一致，主语的人称和数要和谓语一致。　　　3）注意人称代词的宾格形式。　　　4）注意冠词用法，例如： He is an honest student.中的an不能写成a。　　　5）注意拼写、标点符号和大小写，例如：receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。　　(4)描写人物时，要生动具体，例如：　　　1）外表特征：tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。　　　2）服饰颜色：red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。　　　3）内心境界：glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。　　　4）感情描写：love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。　　　5）动作描写：come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。(5)上下文要连贯。上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条原则，因此同学们应把写好的句子，根据故事情节，事情发生的先后次序（时间或空间），使用一些表示并列、递进等过渡词进行加工整理，使文章连贯、自然、流畅。同学们应注意下面过渡的用法：1）表示并列关系的：and, as well as, or... 2）表示转折关系的：but, yet, however... 3）表示时间关系的：when, while, after, before, then, after that... 4）表示因果关系的：so, therefore ,as a result... 5）表示目的的：in order to, in order that , so as to, so that... 6）表示列举的：for example , such as... 7）表示总结性的：in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking...(6)不会表达，另辟蹊径。中考作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定，不以文采打分。造句越简单准确越好，造复合句容易出错，容易被扣分，阅卷场上有句话："错误面前人人平等，文采好不加分"。如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达，可采用变通的办法，化难为易，化繁为简。总之，所造句子要正确、得体、符合英语表达习惯。6.改病句：认真检查，改正错误。中考作文时，由于时间紧、内容多，同学们出错在所难免。因此，改错这一环节必不可少。中考作文评卷是根据要点、语言准确性、上下文的连贯性来给分，根据错误多少来扣分。因此，中考时花几分钟时间用来检查错误显得尤为重要。检查错误应从以下几个方面入手：　　1）格式是否有错。　　2）拼写有无错误。　　3）语言是否用错。　　4）时态、语态错误。　　5）标点错误。　　6）人称是否用错。三. 注意事项　　书面表达要特别注意书写工整，卷面整洁。每年阅卷老师在十来天的时间里要看十几万考生的作文，工作量之大，时间之紧，可想而知。书写是否工整，卷面是否整洁与得分高低直接有关。　　范文1保护环境是人类永恒的话题，随着环境的日益恶化，自然灾害越来越多，近来地震的破坏也日益频繁，尤其是近日日本发生的大地震，使得我们认为人类赖以生存的地球已经面临严重的威胁。如何保护环境就成为人类最重要的任务之一，人人应该有责任保护环境保护我们这个地球家园。请以"How to Protect the Environment"为题写一篇短文，阐述我们应该如何从身边做起来保护环境内容提示：1 环境的现状：越来越糟糕，自然灾害(natural disasters）越来越多，地震的危害严重威胁到了人类的安全；2 好的环境能给人类带来健康和快乐，改善环境意味着保护人类自己，提高生活质量3 环境保护的具体建议：要点自己拟定注意： 1 语句准确、流畅，内容要点完整2 可根据实际情况适当发挥3 字数：70个左右。How to Protect the EnvironmentThe environment is getting worse and worse. More and more natural disasters are appearing, and there have been happened so many strong earthquakes recently in the world, especially in Japan. Good environment can make people feel happy and fit. To improve the environment means improving our life. We mustn't cut down trees. Instead, we should plant more trees and flowers around us. Meanwhile, we should stop factories from pouring waste water into rivers and giving off waste gas into the air. Whenever we see litter on the ground, we should pick it up and throw it into dustbins. Never spit in public. Don't draw on public walls. It's everyone's duty to protect the environment.2假定你是李华，最近你们班就"低碳"生活方式进行了讨论，你的美国朋友Jack来信向你询问讨论情况，请你用英语写封回信，简单参照作文地带介绍的以下讨论结果：1.节水节电；2.垃圾分类；3.少用纸巾，重拾手帕；4.步行，骑自行车或乘坐公交车。参考词汇：低碳low carbon
纸巾tissue注意：词数100以内(不含开头和结尾所给出的字数)；可适当增加细节了，以使行文连贯；开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。Dear Jack,Thank you for your letter asking about our discussion on low carbon lifestyle. Here is something about it._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes,Li Bing参考范文：Dear Jack,Thank you for your letter asking about our discussion on low carbon lifestyle. Here is something about it.We can do a lot in our daily life to achieve the goal of
low carbon life. First, we'd better turn off lights if possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet. Saving water also matters much. Besides, we should sort out the rubbish, hoping that we might recycle some, which will surely benefit us a great deal. ln addition, we suggest using handkerchiefs instead of tissues so that we can prevent more trees from being cut down. More importantly, when we go out, walking, riding bikes or taking buses should be our first choice, which contributes to a cleaner world.3Sunshine in My Life提示：生活中处处满着阳光，每个人都会得到同学的帮助，朋友的支持，老师的关心，亲人的爱护，让你感受到生活中的阳光和幸福。请写一件你经历过的事，说明生活是美好的。要求：1．请根据所给的题目，用英语写一篇短文，词数不少于60个；2．语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；3．文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。4随着互联网的发展和普及，网络购物在中国也变得越来越普遍了，甚至已经成了我们日常生活的一部分了；相信同学们身边一定有不少同学已经通过网络进行购物了，比如淘宝网，京东商城等；但是网络购物究竟有何利弊呢？ 请写一篇短文，谈谈网上购物的好处与坏处。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考范文：We talked about the advantages and disadvantages of
internet shopping these days. Some students think it's very convenience for us to go shopping on the internet.
The shop on Internet for ,
are open for almost 24 hours a day so we can buy something we want at any time if we like. What's more, we needn't to wait in a queue.However, some students disagreed with them. we can't see the things while we are shopping. so we are not sure whether they are good or not. Besides, we can't enjoy the happiness of shopping with our friends.5许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力,为了更好地发现及解决同学们中存在的心理压力问题,你们班特意开展了一次以"Less Pressure, Better Life"为主题的英语演讲比赛,请你准备发言稿,谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法,与同学分享,内容包括:●同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么；●我的压力是什么；●我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。注意:文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。词数80~100；短文的开头已给出(不计入总词数)。Less Pressure, Better LifeHello, boys and girls!Pressure is a serious problem in today's world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That's all. Thank you!参考范文:Less Pressure, Better LifeHello, boys and girls!Pressure is a serious problem in today's world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can't get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams.I'm always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of after-classes at weekends.Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem.That's all. Thank you!6近年来，我国火灾频频发生。日，上海胶东路一座高楼起火，损失严重。这个事件提醒注意防火安全很重要。请你根据以下提示，写一篇短文来分析引起火灾的原因并谈谈你对火灾中自救的建议。要求：1．词数不少于90，短文开头过渡已为你写好，不计入总词数；2．要点完整、层次清楚、语法正确、上下文连贯。提示：防火安全fire safety
electricity
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set off fireworks爬行crawl on one's knees
the fire hydrantUsually fire accidents are caused because of carelessness. For example, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________What can we do to protect ourselves when there is a fire?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考范文7请根据下表中提供的信息，用英语写一篇报道中国成功地发射了"嫦娥二号"探月卫星的短文。词数：80左右。发射时间、地点 日晚10月1日西昌卫星发射中心背景 1.它的建造技术基建与嫦娥一号，并且它有一些改进，比如更高分辨率的摄像头。2.它将会持续120小时在月球表面100公里的高度环绕。意义 1.得到详细的月球表面数据2.标志着中国的科技发展达到了较高水平参考词汇：绕月卫星 circumlunar satellite嫦娥2号 Chang'e-2 Chang'e-2 lunar satellite月球探测卫星 lunar e lunar orbiter收集月球表面数据 collect lunar surface data___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考范文Chang'e 2 is scheduled for launch on October 1st, 2010, the national day of China. Chang'e 2 is China's second lunar orbiter. It is modeled after Chang'e 1 with some improvements including a better camera with higher resolution. Chang'e 2 will be traveling 100 kilometers above the moon for 120 hours. Its goal is to collect lunar surface data. Chang'e 2 is scheduled for launch on October 1st, 2010, the national day of China. All this shows that the development of science and technology in China has reached a high level. In the future, I believe that we will explore the universe further and further.82011年全国实施公共场所禁烟规定，针对这一话题，某中学对该校学生的吸烟情况进行了一次调查，结果如图所示。请就此话题用英语写一篇短文。要求：1. 对调查结果进行描述；2．表明自己的看法并提出建议；3．词数在80左右。提示词: do a survey about...(做一个有关......的调查)3% of the students (百分之三的学生)___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考范文A survey about smokers in a middle school tells that although 90% of all students never smoke, 3% of them often smoke and 7% sometimes do. In other words, 10% of the students smoke. That's terrible.As we know, smoking is harmful to our health. Every year, thousands of people lose their lives because of it. Smoking not only does harm to your health, but also wastes money. Because, a fire may be caused by cigarette ends. It's a pity to learn that one ends in death by smoking.In all, smoking is so dangerous that we should keep away from it.9据报道，从2011年开始韩国除了向所有小学和初高中学生发放纸质的语文、英语、数学教科书之外，同时还将发放光盘形式的电子教科书。这表明，在韩国，电子图书即将走进寻常百姓家。某英文论坛发起了一次主题为"E-Books, Good or Bad?"的讨论，请你写一篇80词左右的短文，表达你对这件事情的看法。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考范文：E-Books Are GoodIt's reported that school students in Korea will use e-books from 2011. What good news this is! E-books have many advantages.Most importantly, they are good for the environment, since they can save lots of paper and trees. Besides, they are very convenient. To get a paper book, one has to spend a lot of time searching for it in a bookshop. But we can find e-books very quickly on the computer.In short, e-books can make us enjoy life better.102011年初，我国南方大部分地区遭受冻雨（freezing rain），特别是贵州、湖南和四川，灾情失分严重。公路、铁路、机场都被迫关闭，电网瘫痪。冻灾致使贵州40万人饮水难，四川两电厂停运。部分山区人民生活异常困难，在各级政府的带领下，人民群众、解放军战士英勇抗击冰灾，涌现出大批可歌可泣的英雄事迹。作为一名中学生，你有何感想？有何打算？能不能改变这种状态？___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考范文As we know, our country suffered heavy ice early 2011. Everything was covered with freezing rain. Guizhou, Hunan and Sichuan suffered the most. It made the buses, trains and planes stop. The disaster destroyed power facilities, cutting power supplies in many areas. As a result, huge economic losses were caused. Many people suffered trouble. There was no food, water or light in some places. Our government called on people to fight against heavy snow. As a student, I think we should learn from those heroes. We must study hard at school. We should learn all kinds of knowledge to make our motherland stronger, better and richer.11.请按照下面6幅图和表格的提示，写一篇题为"Changes in Our Hometown"的英语短文。（词数：50~80，不包括已经给出的单词）内容要点：过去
高楼河水污浊
河水清澈步行、骑自行车
乘公交车、小汽车　　　　　　　Changes in Our Hometown　　Over the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown. In the past,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________　　Over the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown. In the past, the houses in our hometown were very poor, but now many people have moved into tall buildings (there are many tall buildings here and there). The water in the rivers was very dirty, but now the rivers are clean and people can swim in them. People used to walk or ride bikes, but now they can take buses or drive their own cars to go to work.12人人都知道锻炼身体的重要性，可是有些人平时不愿意腾出时间来锻炼，到了生病时才意识到这一点，Mr. Kang 就是这么一个人。根据下面的漫画写一篇题为"Mr. Kang's decision"的短文。（字数100词左右）注意：1．简要叙述四幅图所表现的故事。2．就该故事发表自己的看法。参考词汇：麻将mahjong【参考范文】Mr. Kang is a middle-aged man. One day, he didn't feel himself and he thought it might be not enough exercise . So, on his way to hospital , he decided to have more exercise when he got over his illness. He was no less sure when he was lying in bed in the hospital .But when he did go out of the hospital ,he didn't seem so certain as before . So ,when he is free ,he would still prefer to play mahjong with his friends rather than have sports ,though he still remembers his promise to himself.As we all know, we can have good health if we keep on exercising .Without good health , nothing is possible for you.13人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见。请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文，介绍人们的不同观点，并表达自己的看法。赞成的理由 反对的理由 你的看法1．广交朋友 1．浪费时间 ？2．可自由表达思想 2．影响学习3．有利于外语学习 3．可能上当受骗注：字数100-120之间。（书写不整齐者，酌情扣分。）___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Should students make friends on line? Some people say yes. The internet helps make many friends. Chatting on line, students can more freely express their feelings and opinions, and even get help with their foreign language studies.Others, however, think students should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated on line.It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.14目前，越来越多的中学生利用周末上各种各样的培训班或请家教。对于这一现象，存在两种不同观点：有些人认为有必要 另一些人认为没有必要跟老师学比自己学好可以巩固课堂所学内容可以学到更多的东西 容易养成依赖习惯学生需要时间休息许多培训班和家教以赢利为目的请您根据以上提示，以Is a Training Class of Family Teacher Necessary ?为题，写一篇120 词左右的短文，反映表中内容，并简要阐述自己的观点。文章开头已给出， 不计入总字数。要求：层次清晰，连贯流畅；表达灵活，不要逐字逐句翻译。参考词汇：巩固strengthen；Is a Training Class or Family Teacher Necessary?More and more middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers at the weekend. There are two different viewpoints about it.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Is a Training Class or Family Teacher Necessary?More and more middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers at the weekend. There are two different viewpoints about it.Some thinks it necessary. Firstly, it's more effective to study with a teacher than by themselves. Secondly, it can strengthen what is learnt in class. Besides, they can learn a lot more. Others think it unnecessary. For one thing, students can easily form the habit of dependence. For another, students need time to relax from time to time. What's more, the purpose of many training classes and teachers is to make money.In my opinion, whether a training class or family teacher is needed just depends. If you are really very weak at or interested in a certain subject, maybe it's OK for you. But be sure to choose a good and suitable class or teacher, otherwise it would be a waste of time and money.15最近，你班同学就"父母是不是最好的老师"这一话题展开了讨论。有些人认为父母是最好的老师，有些人认为也不尽然。请根据下表提示，写一篇短文介绍讨论结果以及你的个人观点。观点原因 同意 不完全同意1 教会如何生活 过分溺爱2 指出缺点，指明方向 强加兴趣、价值观3 教会富有爱心 希望值过高要求：1、根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文通顺连贯；2、词数110左右；3、开头已给出，不计入单词总数。Recently, we have had a discussion in our class about whether parents are our best teachers. Some students......______________________________________________________【参考范文】Recently, we have had a discussion in our class about whether parents are our best teachers. Some students agree to the point because they think parents help to point out their mistakes in their lives. They teach them a lot about how to live a meaningful life. What's more, parents' love helps to teach them how to love others. So parents are their most important teachers.However, not all of us hold the same views. Some think that their parents give them too much love, and they are too eager to pass on their values and interests to them. Moreover, their parents sometimes expect too much of them, which makes them feel their goals too difficult to reach.In my opinion, parents are our important teachers. But parents should also try to understand their children more and limit the generation gap.